Phoebe’s Site

Upon reflection of this past workshop. I really liked Coco’s info and help on transitions and how to tie the dreams into the story. I think that I could have had a more useful experience if the workshop was hands-on and more of a class work or experimental writing other than just free writing. However back to the workshop I see the point of making it into a novel start, for this story. During class I did have some ideas come into my head about how to further the story line, and help tie the dreams into the story more. It was helpful in giving me a direction in going.