I think that social media is helpful in keeping friendships until we see our friends again. This was my thesis statement. I think that it has key points but it could have a bit more density to it and bring in other points like a naysayer. Then making my body paragraphs make more sense and more in depth in my thinking rather than surface material.
I learned that I felt scattered and I would try an outline that’s more structured with what my main points are/were. I kind of just started writing this prompt one.
I focused on bringing in quotes that proved my point to add and make my personal experiences have more merit. The quotes helped with that from both authors and it made my point more solidified and have a deeper connection with my personal experiences.
I approach paper 2 with more of a solid outline, and have the prompt on the outline. I would also use better word choices and make them more articulated than just simple, and more points and evidence, also give it a title.
